1. Volume on your recording was consistent. 2. I found it interesting that her father was an explorer
Weaknesses
1. Your presentation lacked organization. You didn’t follow a timeline. It was consuming at times. 2. Your pronunciation could be improved. You mispronounced “renowned.” 3. You did not meet all the requirements. You didn’t state how old she was when her husband became president. You did not mention the dates of her husband’s presidency or say anything about her role in the White House. 4. Presentation was short. You need to put more effort in your work.
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ReplyDeleteStrengths
1. Volume on your recording was consistent.
2. I found it interesting that her father was an explorer
Weaknesses
1. Your presentation lacked organization. You didn’t follow a timeline. It was consuming at times.
2. Your pronunciation could be improved. You mispronounced “renowned.”
3. You did not meet all the requirements. You didn’t state how old she was when her husband became president. You did not mention the dates of her husband’s presidency or say anything about her role in the White House.
4. Presentation was short. You need to put more effort in your work.
Overall grade D+ 21/30